26th September 2014 (Week 8)
Amer Eizwann (0320242)
Amer Eizwann (0320242)
Introduction to Photography
Exercise 4(b): Composition
Lecture:
Today's class began with Mr Vinod giving us a general feedback about our last work. He was quite disappointed because he knew some of us just did the exercise for the sake of doing it and didnt put in much effort. He mention that to pass his class is simple of to get an A it not gonna be easy. Originality is important, He saw that few of the students work were the same subject and there was no originality in there. After he explain about the exercise we did the previous week the asked question and explain furthermore about the things that we were not to sure if it was right or wrong. Later on he started talking about Underpinning Composition, its another rule in photography that will make a picture interesting. He showed few example pictures and asked us what theme-based it was so that we know what underpinning composition is all about. After explaining we had an hour extra he asked us to go out and walk around campus individually and took random picture using the element of 3 person and ROT. After the shoot he gave feedback about the shot we took and continue explaining about the next exercise that we were going to do.
Today's class began with Mr Vinod giving us a general feedback about our last work. He was quite disappointed because he knew some of us just did the exercise for the sake of doing it and didnt put in much effort. He mention that to pass his class is simple of to get an A it not gonna be easy. Originality is important, He saw that few of the students work were the same subject and there was no originality in there. After he explain about the exercise we did the previous week the asked question and explain furthermore about the things that we were not to sure if it was right or wrong. Later on he started talking about Underpinning Composition, its another rule in photography that will make a picture interesting. He showed few example pictures and asked us what theme-based it was so that we know what underpinning composition is all about. After explaining we had an hour extra he asked us to go out and walk around campus individually and took random picture using the element of 3 person and ROT. After the shoot he gave feedback about the shot we took and continue explaining about the next exercise that we were going to do.
Instruction for Exercise 4b
Exercise 4b: Principles underpinning composition
Capture 4 Images adhering to any of the mentioned principles below:
Domination/Emphasis • Isolation • Balance • Repetition • Alignment • Contrast • Rhythm • Symmetry/Asymmetry • Harmony
Capture 4 Images adhering to any of the mentioned principles below:
Domination/Emphasis • Isolation • Balance • Repetition • Alignment • Contrast • Rhythm • Symmetry/Asymmetry • Harmony
Print all 4 images on an A4 as instructed in class.
(Put to use what you have learnt in the Zone system exercises here)
4b) Principals underpinning composition (5%)
Marking Criteria: The image must show evidence of the dominant principle used and the supporting principles (if any) underpinning the composition. The principles underpinning the image must be named and should be visible within the image. Students must showcase their knowledge on exposure using the zone system.
Marking Criteria: The image must show evidence of the dominant principle used and the supporting principles (if any) underpinning the composition. The principles underpinning the image must be named and should be visible within the image. Students must showcase their knowledge on exposure using the zone system.
ISO: 320, f/3.5, 1/60
Symmetry:
Purely because we can see there is balance up and down also balance on the left and right.
ISO: 100, f/5, 1/640
Repetition:
The mirrors of the building gives the same pattern from the bottom all the way to the top.
ISO: 200, f/5.6, 1/800
Isolation:
The boy on the right is looking at the couple next to him. From his expression can see that he feels alone and awkward.
ISO: 1000, f/2.8, 1/250
Domination:
The guy with flames on his hand was the center of attraction. He was different then the other which makes him the dominate subject.
Feedback: Feedback week 8
Amer, the first two pictures, symmetry and repetition were acceptable and technically correct but not notable in terms of impact. The last two were not appropriate with regard to the principle ascribed to the pictures. Domination does not simply mean a point of interest that is the closes to the lens, it must illicit a sense of command and power/strength which the picture chosen does not. Also, the choice of isolation was of the exercise for the class that pertained to the rule of thirds exercise. I expect you to show more initiative and go out there and get me an shot that is not according to your convenience. - Mr Vinod
Amer, the first two pictures, symmetry and repetition were acceptable and technically correct but not notable in terms of impact. The last two were not appropriate with regard to the principle ascribed to the pictures. Domination does not simply mean a point of interest that is the closes to the lens, it must illicit a sense of command and power/strength which the picture chosen does not. Also, the choice of isolation was of the exercise for the class that pertained to the rule of thirds exercise. I expect you to show more initiative and go out there and get me an shot that is not according to your convenience. - Mr Vinod
Reflection:
Experience:
From today's class, we started with Mr Vinod giving feedback the exercise we did last week. I make me feel better and more confident to do better in the class when i get good feedback. It motivates me to get better shots. I realise that from now i have to put even more extra effort if i want to get an A for the class. Like what Mr Vinod said, its not about the grades but to me when we hv tired our best a good grade can be vert satisfying. From the experience of walking around the campus, i found out that its never easy to just shoot a picture. A good picture has to be well compose so i hv to know where to stand and when to press the trigger. Patients is the key. Shots are not going to just come to you but when u find a good subject to take a picture of you have to wait for the right time for it to be a good picture.
Observation:
From today's class, I've observe that producing a good picture is not just good exposure and good composition, the subject matter has to be interesting too. If its well compose picture but the subject if boring there is no use. During that hour of shooting in campus, i saw that it was not as easy as i though it would be because there was so many people walking around and sometimes it makes it hard to shoot what you want to shoot. You have to wait till the other disturbing people to move away and hope that the subject that you want to take doesnt move. You also hv to make sure u dont look like a creep when ure taking shots because some people dont like you taking picture of them, so that way you approach people is very important. At times you have to "buat bodoh je" and just go around and shoot.
Findings:
From today's class, I find that as a photographer we have to be brave. Brave to approach people and take a picture of then and also brave to take risk and experiment with the picture we take. Dont stop shooting and eventually there is bound to be a good shot somewhere. Try something different and think before you shoot. When you buy a camera your are basically paying your shutter count which means you are paying every shot you take. So make every shot count.


































